I have a question!

Hi! I’m new here, and I have a question. Is it alright to ask some of you to critique the story I wrote for one of my final papers in college? If so, how do I post my work?

I hope someone responds, thank you!

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Hi Dan, I’d be happy to read your paper, but I’d rather receive as a WORD doc by email. I’m sure if you google me, you’l find either my Facebook or my email with no problem.
Bette Kosmolak

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Hi, I’m happy to hear that. I believe I’ve found your email. I’ll contact you through email soon, thanks!

Hey @Dan,

Is it a short story? If it is, I’d be interested in looking at it too. Also curious what genre it is.

I’m with @bette on the preferred format being a Word Doc.

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proactivitypress (at) gmail.com

I’ll have a look.


Yes, it’s a short story around 4,500 words. It’s a gothic horror/thriller (I’m not really sure) genre inspired by “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson.

Thank you! Will send it soon. Do you also want it in Word Docs?

I’m mistaken. It’s around 4,000 words.

:+1: Just sent you a message with my e-mail address.

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Welcome to the group, and thank you so much for sharing your work with us…it’s like when someone brings snacks (for absolutely any reason) or a puppy! It’s all good.


I’m looking forward to reading.

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Hi! Thanks for responding. I’ll be sending my work very soon.